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Want more to the story

"Love the mystery and was they are so close. Wish it was completed "

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Passion as red as blood

"It's a really great book I loved it. Your an amazing writer. Will there be a sequel?"

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Different

"Something different not really into vampire stuff but not so bad so far"

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Review

"A fear short book for sure. Loved the characters and their personalities. Would totally recommend this book."

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It was very interesting

"BRAVO!!! THIS IS AN AMAZING BOOK THE TYPE OF LOVE ID ALSO WANA BE PART OF THE TYPE OF LUST THAT LASTED FOREVER, I DONT REGRET READING THIS BOOK U ARE SOO TALENTED WELL DONE ON THIS ONE."

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Loving it

"I'm loving this story."

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Inspiring

"I loved the storyline and the description of each character to really paint a picture. I thought Alexandria was so humble and sweet. Alroy was beyond enticing and sexy. I do like the way that despite this being a sugar daddy/baby situation, they seriously care for each other despite all the circumstances. I think everyone else should read it for the inspiration I found from this. "

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Lovely story

"It's an intriguing story ....I enjoy reading it . Keep up the good "

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I am enjoying this far!

"I like how it’s flowing. "

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Jean9

"Love the story. There are some grammar errors. "

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Passiion as red as roae

"Loved the story. But Please make sequal. Tuen her ass into his vamp bride n put them haters n they places!! "

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Love it

"I really loved your storyline and found that the main characters you have created truly love each other. I do find that their are some instances where the story does not make sense, including that last chapter I felt confused in what was happening. Overall I truly enjoyed what I read and hope that you continue to story."

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Passion as red as blood

"I don't like open ends. I was pleasantly surprised that this was a vampire story. But the typos, lack of punctuation and grammar errors, makes it harder to read then necessary. I would recommend editing the story. "

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Plot great but fix the typos

"The grammar and typos are numerous. The story jumps around a good bit. The plot and story are very good which is why I stuck it out but I wanted to pull my hair out with the typos. "

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Passion as Red as Blood

"This story had potential to be good but the story was inconsistent, spelling words, jumping around with no explanation, and too many sudden twists with no background."

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