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What is your opinion?

Fated to be

"Love it so far🥰"

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Good

"It's a great book great story great characters "

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Fated to be rejected

"I enjoy the plot line, however the grammar isn't too good. It needs to be properly edited I really like the characters so far. The plot is excellently written. I have really enjoyed it so far. The derby Tail is fantastic and I really enjoy it. I'm excited to continue reading it. I really like the writing style, I can't do better than that. It's very eloquent. Very descriptive, no misunderstanding in the story so far. It's not the best grammar or spelling and could use some improvement. However I've seen much worse, the other books I couldn't even read."

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Fated to be the rejected one

"The is good you don't want to put it down "

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Story plot is good

"Plot of the story is good, length is ideal for a quick read. Needs a little refresher on some of the vocabulary used in some sentences, so they run smoother but overall it’s a great story. "

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Goff up TV

"Hu ft hy nnn no ji jjj jjj jjj jjj day bug chat get guys hhh. Ccs guy cde car "

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Needs work

"Using the wrong tense is driving me crazy. "

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Like it so far

"The constant adding of an s to words that should not have them is driving me crazy. "

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Mrs

"See prior statements."

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Miss

"Could be a good story but way to many plot lines going in all sort of directions some added that just make it worse "

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Hard read

"It seems to rushed and hard to understand because the grammer isnt done well"

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