What is your opinion?
A sweet short story
"You've got a sweet story here. I would recommend to anyone wanting a sweet romance without all the smut. Just a couple of notes. 1. Go back and check your namea. I know you mention Alex instead of Sebastian a.few times towards the end. 2. You could silly expand your book by adding what happened when she got home from prom, graduation, did stop mom try to keep her money, a chapter or two on college and jobs.after graduation, Lilly and Jace, what happened to step mom and step sister etc. The end of the story feels very rushed. 3. I used a screen reader to listen to your book. When you have ************ etc it reads everyone astrick astrick astrick. It's easy to skip over but annoying as a user that is able to enjoy your story via screen reader. 4. Most importantly keep writing ✍️ you've got lots of talent (I could never write a whole book) I'm sure you will go far with your writting. Best of luck in your writting!"
Strings of love
"Great story, great characters. Love the way the main couple get together. Great read will consider reading this authors other works."
Returning Reader
"A Cinderella setting, I love your books author. Keep the chapters flowing."
Avid reader
"It's nice really nice, kudos"
Strings of love
"Have always love your work Not surprised with this "
Passionate Reader
"WOW THIS BOOK IS SO GOOOOOOOOOD, I LOVED EVERY OUNCE OF IT. THE GRAMMARS ARE SO AMAZING. NO ERROR TYPOS. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR, IM A BIG FAN OF ALL YOUR BOOKS."
