The Love Of The Invisible Girl by invisiblegirl at Inkitt
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The love of the invisible girl

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Summary

Petricor, Dama Blanca. Son poemas que fueron creados en el momento que supe que era "El amor a primera vista"

Status
Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Petricor

_Ojalá y el café en mi taza durará tanto como el torrente.

_No me juzgues soy creyente de que en la vida todo se puede.

_Así como tú me dijiste y exigiste.

"Orgullosa has de ser y a nada has de temer, pues tú apellido debes elevar y en la cima debes de estar"

_Aun así tanto temor se llevo mi descanso

Ahora como bestia salgo a cazarlo.



_Pero quién diría que de tanto buscar y nunca acabar.

_ Encontré a un ser, quizás celestial.

_ Un poco duro y tosco, lo acepto.

_Quizas no sabe dar consuelo

- Pero si me sabe escuchar y aleja mi soledad

_ Que locura pensar que creí y sería eterno

_ Pero no, aquel sufrimiento se oculta

_ Mi dicha es segura en aquellas horas con tal ser quizas celestial.


_ Y aunque aquí estoy con mi soledad

_ No dudo que ella es temporal

_ Así como mi café en la taza disfrutando el torrente que pasa y me dice que todo aquello en el pasado está.

_ Se qué debo avanzar.

cómo temporal dejando su olor.

_Mañana veré a este ser quizás celestial,

y yo se que en sus abrazos olere tan hermoso petricor.

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