What is your opinion?
Proof read it
"The story would be so much better if you proof read your work. There are punctuation errors, bad spelling and words missing. Pity, because I think it would be a good story otherwise."
Definitely needs editing
"This would be much easier to read if you had it proofed and edited beforehand. I haven't really decided on anything else yet as it's a bit difficult to get through. "
Chained by my bully
"Okay so I have some questions for the author and hopefully that it can answer my question what does this book have to do with the first one second one third one fourth one to this one cuz it says that it's in the bully series but I do not understand how it has to do with tiara or Scarlett or Reese or Adrian or Ariana and their kids soren and Flynn I have no clue I'm so confused right now please answer my question because I'm so lost how these books tie in together at least the last one I know how the four tie in but I don't know how this one ties into all of them I don't get it so please explain it to me"
