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The Sword and the Mountain

"This book held my interest from the first page to the last! The discovery that her little brother could levitate a baseball was a clincher! You have to write a story for Lessa and Zar to get back together! Perhaps something happens to her parents or Brody that requires Zar to come to Earth to help Lessa? There were a few word usage grammar mistakes so I strongly suggest running your chapters through a grammar checker like Grammarly or a writing AI before you post them. And get busy publishing this as a book!!! I will buy it!!!"

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Prophecies

"Great story for dragonlovers and fantasy adept or anyone who loves a good fantasy story, with a female MC. Plausible characters, a sassy dragon..."

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The Sword and the Mountain

"Fantasy brought and adventure brought to life by a talented author, I hope there is a second book. "

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Loved it

"Awesome story! I hope there is a book 2 coming out to continue the story. I want to know what happens with Brody and why was he kidnapped in the first place. "

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Loving the story so far

"Great story, hope the river/dissappearing thing gets explained. One annoying niggle - why did the younger brother get kidnapped in the first place?"

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The sword and the Mountain

"I love this book because of all the fun, fantasy and along with a bit of humor.Id recommend this book to fantasy and myth lovers and overall the chapters are amazing and I cant wait until the end result. I give this book at 10/10"

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Thanks for sharing

"Great story. Hope there's more to come. I haven't looked to see if you've written anything else yet. But I plan to become a follower and check it out. Thanks again for sharing. "

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