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beautiful

"I am enjoying the story so far. keep up the gret work"

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moongoddess

"i love this chapter and other chapters i am very excited to see where jett takes us he is one trouble funny man whom i think has lots of love to give but just afraid when overall also lulu is afraid of love lets see them blossom up while being gifted and dangerous and stubborn i gave you five stars because i love your novel also i cant seem to cook while reading it .the grammar and style its on point please don't take too long to post as we might get bored and this story its not boring at all it has education and how well we must have manners and be kind and considerate "

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moongoddess

"i love this chapter and other chapters i am very excited to see where jett takes us he is one trouble funny man whom i think has lots of love to give but just afraid when overall also lulu is afraid of love lets see them blossom up while being gifted and dangerous and stubborn i gave you five stars because i love your novel also i cant seem to cook while reading it .the grammar and style its on point please don't take too long to post as we might get bored and this story its not boring at all it has education and how well we must have manners and be kind and considerate "

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The Apha's fated mate

"Good story"

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The Alpha's Fated mate

"Loved the book. Great job, Author. "

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Really enjoying it so far

"Would recommend to someone who’s into this style of book, like the writing style and the characters"

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The Alphas Fated Mate

"Happy ending to a wonderful book. "

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The alphas fated mate

"Great story , loved the characters. The plot was good ; nice balance of romance and war"

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Love it so far

"Really enjoying this book, the British humour is fantastic! I’m on the edge of my seat to see where this is going "

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The Alpha Fated Mate

"I totally enjoyed this story and hope to see more. Great job!"

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Mates

"Very good book"

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The alphas fated mate

"This was a fun read would definitely recommend to friends! It was a little different then most werewolf stories but I enjoyed it! Great book overall!"

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The alpha's fated mate

"Loved the overall story but there are numerous errors throughout. For example fresh off my mind, in the epilogue L aura had a boy first in hospital but then when she comes home from hospital and friends and family are with them, he's got an older sister. Things like this are throughout and it was a little confusing. But the plot is very good. It just needs twerking to fix it up. I loved the book.its just missing a bit"

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Jett black

"I really enjoyed this warewolf book, it's slightly different to other ones, I did get a bit emotional reading it which is why I'm writing a review. As you know its good if it pulls on your heart strings "

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The alphas fated mate

"Really enjoyed it and was great to hear some English sayings that we all say thank you look forward to the next "

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Amazing story

"This was an excellent story. Thank you "

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Amazing story

"Really enjoyed reading "

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Alphas Fated Mate

"Really well done. Lots of plot twists, which could have been fleshed out with more detail, but still good. Lots of characters to love and hate! All in all a great read."

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The alpha’s fated mate

"Really enjoyed this book Well done hope to read more of your work in the future x"

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The alpha's fated mate

"For a first book here on Inkitt this is a really really good read. I loved it from begining to end. I recommend it to anyone who likes to read about werewolves, because everything is really good explained. Especially if you are new to the world of werewolves, this is a good start. I wish this author the very best in her endevours and I am looking forward to book 2."

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