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An Exquisitely Written Story!!

"I loved that the story is so well written, that the reader can see a feel everything in the story! Remarkable vision in the plot. Extremely engaging story!"

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Excellent

"Love war compassion and triumph all wrapped together. Great story…I can’t stop reading it. It’s compelling "

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Nikki's Review

"This story choice of a first-person narrative with dialogue-driven storytelling is intriguing and has its merits but, a careful balance between dialogue and narrative, along with attention to clarity in dialogue presentation, could make this story even more engaging. The author has taken an innovative approach, and with some refinement, this story has the potential to stand out in its own unique way."

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Beautiful beginnings

"I absent love it"

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alexander born to be his wife

"plot thivkens poor orincess how much more abuse does she have to suffer"

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Born to be his wife

"I enjoy the book. Thank you for the up date"

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Born to be his wife

"Slow storyline "

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Born to be his wife (review swap)

"While the plot seems interesting I think the author needs to rethink the delivery and writing style of this story. it seems very bland, not much substance or description. Also, sometimes I cannot tell who has said what. This does have great potential but I think you may need to refine your writing a little more - take a look on YouTube and other blogs on how to improve your writing. "

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Cold story

"Too distant And formal"

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