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Mercy killing

"It get more interesting as the story goes along"

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Creepy!

"The entire story was great! But I feel that it deserves a better ending. Apart from that, everything is amazing. The presence, the detail everything just fit into the story like a piece. I felt really involved into it. Great work! Keep writing! Regards;"

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Aazing

"The spelling and gramer wasn't very clever but fantastic book to read in going to tell my friends about it. "

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Mercey's killing

"I loved the book it really kept my interest, but left me wanting more I would like to know if they stay in the house or moved and did the husband service. Yes I would recommend this book to anyone "

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Mercy killing

"I liked this book but you should look at your description on your profile. Because it is not correct. Deadly ground has this story when you click on it . I cannot get that story to come up this one comes up instead."

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"The grammar started off great in the beginning but was quickly thrown out the window. Initially I was really impressed because you don't see that often here, so I was dissapointed to see it go down hill as it went on. Maybe you were just in a hurry to finish. Also confused as of why the description does not match the actual story at all I'm not dissapointed, it's still a really great sorry just misleading I would have also like to know how the jenkins were at the end . I was dissapointed to see no update from them. Plot hole alert : the one cop knew about the bugs and didn't say anything, but it was never explained why and what he had to do with it. "

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"The grammar started off great in the beginning but was quickly thrown out the window. Initially I was really impressed because you don't see that often here, so I was dissapointed to see it go down hill as it went on. Maybe you were just in a hurry to finish. Also confused as of why the description does not match the actual story at all I'm not dissapointed, it's still a really great sorry just misleading I would have also like to know how the jenkins were at the end . I was dissapointed to see no update from them. Plot hole alert : the one cop knew about the bugs and didn't say anything, but it was never explained why and what he had to do with it. "

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Nice

"The story in between is lil bit confusing...otherwise it is good "

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intresting

"kinda unique yet intresting"

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Very nice

"Very interesting story with lots of twists and turns. I like the detail and that your never sure what will happen next. Will definitely recommend it to friends. "

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Mercy's killing

"Very interesting plot. Well-written"

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Nice

"Good story! The grammar is good, and the plot is amazing. I'm easily dumbfounded by plots, but this one, left me in shock for like ten minutes. Good job Misty DawnBratcher! :D"

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"The plot started great for me but then in the middle of the story it starts to get confusing and kind of annoying. The grammar also drops off then. "

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Horror

"It's quite a good it keeps getting interesting "

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Meh

".. Wat.... It just finish like zat.... n jack he deserved z death coz he was a pervert..... Welll z story lack smthing...... "

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Suck it

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