"The Scythe"

"mmfcf; suspenseful, thrilling, a mystery that flowed and ebbed its way into its final conclusion, Death to all three participants and the killer, Mr Tuttle......Most of the Story was focused on Jessie, and very little on the other two deaths, Your ending would give R.L. Stine nightmares...........and a run for his money..........work a bit on the grammar, spelling and sentence structures........otherwise, great story and a super future for you........keep writing and win the gold........."