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There love

"Their love feels so pure and beautiful. My heart is melting"

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Love it! I love the story line. It's got mystery, drama, & shows the true internal struggle that everyone faces when they have a past that made them who they are.

"I love the story line. It's got mystery, drama, & shows the true internal struggle that everyone faces when they have a past that made them who they are."

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Darker shade of intimacy

"It was ok, wish it was longer. It could tell more about what happens with the family feud and their relationship"

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Eh a little predictable. Pretty good all around

"This is an OK story but not enough etoticism pretty light on that. But ok for people that like a quick read. "

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