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your story will stick with me forever

"This is one of those stories that will stick with me for the rest of my life. No exaggeration. My heart was pounding as I was reading this. The parents reactions and knowing some guy was targeting their five year old daughter made it real for me. And Mr. Panomie was super creepy. I thoroughly enjoyed this story."

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Wow

"That was one of the creepiest stories I have ever read! What was that little thing? Just wow. The fear experienced by the parents was what made it so terrifying and real for me. And the empathy I felt for poor Kevin in the end. There are so many questions raised in this story that I really want answers too but I know I'll never get them."

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Great story

"I very much enjoyed this story. I think I know one of the characters. Not going to tell. "

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