What is your opinion?
Overall, a great story
"I enjoyed this entire story up until the last two chapters. Now, if there’s a sequel to this (I haven’t checked yet) then I may be appeased. I was a little disappointed at the end, thinking that the entire story was a dream, but then her two mates appear on her first day back at school complete with their correct names. But then she only has a feeling about them and no memories of them, real or just a dream. I think perhaps I’m just upset because I was keen to read more of this story and it seemed to end abruptly. So if there isn’t a sequel yet then I hope that a sequel is planned because I now have many questions wondering about what will happen next. Was it just a dream? Was it an alternate reality and her memories have been wiped again? Definitely want a sequel. I hope I find one already written, but if not, please write one! I want to know what happens next"
The alpha female
"Excellent piece of writing. Twists and turns and jumps around but keeps the imagination turning. Well done enjoyed it immensely"
Fantastic!!
"Wow!! Twists and turns everywhere!!! Most definitely a must read!!!"
Great character
"Great plot, great character, not my style of writing or theme but great - I will take the warnings - don't read in public! :O keep up the great work."
Full of twists!
"Okay, first of, do not read in public. Second, be prepared for twists! If you seek plot twists, cliff hangers, and mind freak scenes, this is for you. Good for YA - Adult readers, I believe Readers aged 50+ won't like this. Maybe add "Erotica" as tag, so readers would be prepared! But overall, great writing! "
Positively, do not read in public!
"I am a man myself but I have enjoyed the first person pov of the protagonist, each scene was just sending shivers down my spine, I should have taken the warning seriously, dang! those scenes can't leave my mind now. I say, write more! Overall, author has been true to her tag that this is a cliffhanger, so you need to have your own answer at the end of the book for the biggest twist, it's there! lying all around the chapters, great job!"
Intriguing but frustrating
"I'm not sure how to rate the story for these various items without going back and rereading it, so somewhat disregard the ratings. I found the story confusing with its various dream and vision sequences, but that's also a valid and intentional technique. I respect that and it's very well done, but is something I find personally frustrating because I want a nice story wrapped up with a happy ending. While that's not a very literate take on things, I have found life hard enough on it's own and tend to use stories as an escape valve. There are probably a lot of readers like me -- readers who aren't looking for great literary dives and endings. That does not negate the validity of this type of writing, it's just saying that this particular story was a little bit of a mismatch for me. That said, the plot and the twists and turns are very creative. I am left curious as to whether some of the concepts are completely original or something exists elsewhere perhaps in folk stories? I don't remember seeing a spicy warning about the story, but maybe I wasn't looking? I don't personally care for in-depth sex scenes. Too often they come across this gratuitous and padding the word count. In this particular story though, the writer seemed to do a pretty good job with them. I still found myself skimming most of the sex scenes as I just don't find that sort of thing very interesting to read about. I also strongly dislike the idea of two mates. I do see though that within the dream sequence it becomes a foreshadowing technique at the end of the story that this is something that will in some form actually happen. So although this isn't the sort of thing I was exactly looking for, I would say it's quite well done and that the writer achieved their goal. "
Well thought out
"The ending is not as good as the middle. Beginning and ending were rushed"
