His Withered Angel
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His Withered Angel

This story contains themes of: depression, miscarriage

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Summary

"There's no need to go searching for a bride, Dadi. We don't need a bride. It's a surrogate that we need. In order to fulfill my obligation, I need a surrogate to bear the heir." **** "We have less than two days left to repay the money," said Mitali, stifling her sobs under a sniffle. "We received an offer from the heartless moneylender Vijay Singh. A family of means is seeking a surrogate for their son who is not married. His proposal involves waiving the interest and 20% of the principal if we agree. The family's offer is fifty lakhs," he said, avoiding eye contact with her. **** What happens when desperation and debt force two different worlds to collide?

Status
Complete
Chapters
38
Rating
4.7 (6 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

โ€œThe trustโ€™s rules were set in stone by your grandfather, as you know. The โ€˜chairpersonโ€™ title and access to the trust funds are reserved only for blood-line relatives with offspring,โ€ Shanti warned, her eyes shifting suspiciously between her grandchildren..

As her grandmother spoke, Purvi scratched her temples and focused on mapping the room in her brain, rather than paying attention to her words. Her grandson, Adhrit, showed no interest with his eyes glued to his phone screen.

โ€œKaddu! Purvi! Do you want the hard earned money of your grandfather and father go to charity after my death?โ€ she asked, through gritted teeth.

Purvi muttered audibly to her grandmother, โ€œAll that money, and we still canโ€™t make decisions about our own life.โ€ A snigger slipped through Adhritโ€™s lips, which he covered up with a cough.

Shanti directed a displeased glare towards them. โ€œActing according to othersโ€™ expectations might become necessary due to circumstances, and one cannot make every choice without considering anyoneโ€™s emotions.โ€

As she adjusted the pleats of her mauve silk saree, her eyes gleamed with determination. โ€œAdhrit, I desire for you to tie the knot.โ€

Adhrit tossed his phone onto the side of the couch and placed his outstretch arm behind the couch. He stated in a matter-of-fact tone that he had taken note but would not get married. โ€œIโ€™ve reached my limit with the toxicity created by marriages. You were perceptive enough to realize that Di and I wouldnโ€™t get married unless this clause was added, which is why you impelled Dadu to include it.โ€

Her soft gaze softened as she reached out her wrinkled hand to touch his jaw.. Her touch poured out maternal affection, and his resolve weakened under the elixir his soul craved.

โ€œGod didnโ€™t create all marriages to fail, my son. He made some in the paradise. Just like my story with your grandfather. Marriage is not always a source of suffering for everyone. For some people, their best friends are found through the bond of marriage. You truly deserve happiness after all the hardships youโ€™ve faced, my dear.โ€

โ€œItโ€™s not about my happiness, is it?โ€ The resolve was further flickered by the silver lining and mirage of hope, but a sardonic smile appeared on his lips. โ€œIf it were only about me being happy, I would have a real say in this.โ€

โ€œKaddu...โ€

โ€œI must agree with you regarding the funds.โ€ His sarcastic smirk grew deeper as his grandmotherโ€™s eyes widened in surprise at his statement that he didnโ€™t want his Daduโ€™s or Diโ€™s hard work to be wasted..

โ€œYou made a wise choice, my dear. Do you have someone in your mind or do you want me to search for your bride?โ€ she asked, caressing her grandsonโ€™s cheek.

The glint in Adhritโ€™s eyes as he took his grandmotherโ€™s hand made her suspicions go wild. โ€œThereโ€™s no need to go searching for a bride, Dadi. We donโ€™t need a bride. Itโ€™s a surrogate that we need. In order to fulfill my obligation, I need a surrogate to bear the heir.โ€

The realization of Adhritโ€™s strategy caused Shanti to quickly retract her hand with a shocked expression and widened eyes. โ€œA surrogate? Are you out of your mind, Adhrit?โ€

With a dismissive glance, Adhrit shrugged his shoulders and turned away. โ€œBeing pragmatic is one of your qualities, Dadi. Take a broader approach to looking at the situation instead of having tunnel vision. I gave you the solution. I wonโ€™t agree to any other except that one.โ€

Upon receiving her cue, Purvi stepped up to support her brother. Dadi, Kaddu detests the notion of marriage but has to have an heir due to an absurd requirement in the inheritance. This approach will fulfill both conditions.โ€

Shanti Sinha was nothing if not adept at sensing the atmosphere and understood that her grandchildren had besieged her with their unity. Her pale lips formed a tiny smile as she observed her grandchildrenโ€™s strategic planning. If they could adapt to her style of play, she was willing to participate in their game.

โ€œI can see your side, and I agree with both of you. But I have a condition. I will choose the surrogate.โ€

The siblings looked at each other, surprised, and nodded yes. โ€œLess work for me, Dadi. Go ahead,โ€ said Adhrit, relishing the taste of victory.

But Purvi could not ignore the uncanny smile on her grandmotherโ€™s visage. She had strategized her next moves, and she could not help but wonder if they had walked right into her plan.


โ€œSurrogate? Are you serious, bhaiyya?โ€ asked Mitali. Her brotherโ€™s revelation during their sudden meeting outside the call center made her forget how to breathe.

With a defeated huff, Anurag raked his fingers through his hair and tugged at it in exasperation. โ€œItโ€™s better than what you searched for, Mitali. Organ donation? Seriously?โ€

She avoided his gaze and instead looked at her hands that were hanging limp in her lap. Her desperation had taken over completely and destitution ripped her to shreds like a pack of vicious piranhas.

โ€œI expedited the process and itโ€™s imperative we get the money. We have less than two days left to repay the money,โ€ said Mitali, stifling her sobs under a sniffle.

โ€œWe received an offer from the heartless moneylender Vijay Singh. A family of means is seeking a surrogate for their son who is not married. His proposal involves waiving the interest and 20% of the principal if we agree. The familyโ€™s offer is fifty lakhs,โ€ he said, avoiding eye contact with her.

The words of her brother rendered Mitali speechless. Despite being pulled towards the light at the tunnelโ€™s end, she couldnโ€™t ignore the abyss between it and her.

โ€œMitali, weโ€™ll have thirty lakhs to spare after getting our home back. Please.โ€

Tears rolled out of tremulous eyes with reckless abandon as the dreams woven by the same eyes shattered against the last twig that could stop the apples of her eyes - her family - from drowning in the abyss of hopelessness.

โ€œBut... but, what about my marriage, bhaiyya?โ€ She dug her nails into the back of her palms. โ€œAgreeing to this means marriage will never happen for me.โ€

Anuragโ€™s twisted lips let out a wry chuckle. โ€œMarriage? Honestly, Mitali? Is your marriage more important to you than our dignity and home? Some gratitude!โ€ he said, shaking his head in disbelief.

Gratitude was a trigger that caused the splinters of her broken dreams to prick at her conscience. It was impossible to fathom Anuragโ€™s reality, and the offer seemed like a ticket to heaven compared to the debtโ€™s strangulation.

โ€œIโ€™ll do it. Iโ€™ll be the surrogate theyโ€™re looking for.โ€

Let Yagya Chowdary know what you thought about this chapter!

Masande
Masande

I love the start! Anurag is manipulative, I don't like him much. Poor Mitali, I hope that family and Adhrit treat her well.

9 months

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