What is your opinion?
Very Interesting
"This book really grew on me as I read through the chapters. Jake and Sarah seemingly fell in love at first sight and are carrying that love into their personal pleasurable adventures. I just hope they make good decisions amidst this found affection for each other. I would LOVE to read more stories featuring interactions with these two and I think that this particular book was very well written. For being a short story, the author made good use this to make a compelling tale with both of them being shy at first to being comfortable in such a short period of time. It's a story told quickly, but efficiently. Nothing unrealistic aside from a few minor details here and there. A great read and I highly recommend it. I enjoyed this book! :D"
Good so far
"Sweet characters. Plot this far has kept my interest "
Would read more
"I would read more short stories with these two, especially if they offered more info to get to know each character better. The plot is there, some places could use expanding imo. For a short erotica story, it definitely works. The grammar is good, minor issues here and there. The biggest issue for me was the past and present tense changes, but that was easy to get over. Great work so far"
