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Love me always
"Liked this story very much!"
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Happy ever after
"Great story"
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Love
"Enjoy the story - although a lot of sadness, but also a lot of love. Well done!"
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Love Me Always
"Book is essentially pure dialogue between characters. There's not much background information or descriptions of scene, characters, or actions. Because of it being just dialogue there's a lot of times where the name of who is being talked to is forced into the dialogue and makes the conversation kind of hard to read because it feels unnatural. The idea behind the story seems like a good place to start I just feel that there could be more time taken to set an actual scene and give descriptions to make it better and more easier to follow. "
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