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"I have really enjoyed this story and I hope it continues as I need to know if they get married and have children."

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A good book with lots of little twists

"I'm really enjoying this book lots of little twists pop up from nowhere, a bit of raunchiness and characters are really good. "

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Where were you I love the story line I would recommend to my friends I chose this rating because it's a very enjoyable book

"I really enjoy this book. The story line is very enjoyable and well written. You feel like your there and your the one living the story. And one could only dream of having such an exciting life."

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Where were you

"Interesting 🤔"

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WHERE WERE YOU

"Honestly, I gust love the author so I went on to read her books. And it's all because all the books I've read and are written by this author, I have loved and they are all realistic and relate to real life situations. So far I've had only good reads by this author. And I love Jackson and Melita together 😁😍😍😍😍"

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Love

"Love love love. "

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Revoew

"From what I can see this is a good story. I was really into it although I want to read a lot more. I can't read all 17 chapters because there's other books I have to review. Great job!👍"

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God I love the suspense of this book

"You are a fantastic writer and should keep it up. Your plots and back stories and sad but amazingly written keep up the good work. I can honestly say I am a proud reader of your book☺️😃🥰"

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Where Were You

"It's good that you discusses the issue if children between them. AND, the effect it can have on a relationship....even IF it's just in the 'talking' stage. I have 2 kids, 1 the farther DIDN'T want the responsibility AFTER it got here...went around saying I got pregnant on purpose....my child was a TOTAL surprise pregnancy. My husband 'stepped up' or thought he was...bullshit ..now we have 1....."before anything happens (happened) to (his) mama".....now he doesn't want responsibility for either. I'm mom and dad BOTH......but that's ok... because they KNOW who does what for them and loves them. Hope you relax and destress. "

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Where were you

"I think that the female character is very relatable and I would like to see how she goes with jacks. Jacks is very much a mystery so I would love to see where this goes."

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Where were you?

"Interesting plot and fun banter"

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Nice

"Nice so far"

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So far it’s great!

"I like this story as an easy read :) I’m hoping the plot develops and isn’t predictable! I have a bad habit of being able to predict a story ending before I read it! Hoping for a surprise! "

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