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Great story

"I really enjoyed this story. It was a beautiful and I was immersed in the world the author created. The pacing was good. I did feel like alot of the things that happened were happening around the characters rather than to them but it was ok. A little more on the fluffy side and I loved it! I think I would have loved to know more about the civilians of Basmorte. I might have expected some kick back from them with the removal of slaves. The entire population was mainly vampires and I would have thought not all of them would accept an elf king being married to a vampire queen. Also the conversation between Thaden and his father prior to the wedding would have been interesting. And we didn't get to see ethe baby be born 🥲 I wanted to know if they would have a hybrid vamp elf god baby but I guess I will never know haha Recommend to people who maybe like slightly lower stakes and fluffy unconditional love. "

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Shadow of Desire

"An amazing story. One that holds so much wisdom.and clarity. I loved it. Keep up the good work."

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Shadows of Desire

"I enjoyed the story very much. It had good characters and a good plot. The way the author mistakes one word for another sometimes made it hard to decipher what she meant, but otherwise it was good. "

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Shadows of desire

"Loved it! Couldn’t stop reading it until I finished"

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Shadows of Desire

"Wonderful fantasy story. So much sadness, drama and intrigue. Love that endured so much yet brought forth everlasting joy and love"

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Shadows of Desire

"This was amazing. The author did an amazing job. I was literally hooked to the novel. Couldn't stop reading. I would recommend this to all my friends."

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It good

"It's a really good story and I enjoy reading it. Professional in nature, and a good plot, it draws you in with the details. "

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