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Undying Devotion

"The story is unexpected but in a good way, There are a lot of mystery stories out there but this one is so refreshing and worth it for one day of straight reading!"

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There's a lot of suspense

"The writer created a lot of mystery about the serial killer, but it got dragged for too long in revealing who it was. There were some plot holes that made this story feel weird because the supernatural element made for an interesting plot twist but it just added to delaying revealing the motives of the killer."

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Feedback

"The plot and the writing style are very good, a bit unsatisfied at the end at how Arion found the killer, personally maybe it should be drag a little bit more to feel more frustrated and angry toward Alaric but he is the demon king after all. Very good plot and story telling indeed. 👍"

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Interesting but too rough for me

"It was an interesting book.. well written compelling.. but too much for me I think I prefer more light books with really happy endings. Really interesting and well written though. It unfolds nicely .."

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