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A great Prequel, a great story on its own!

"This was such an interesting introduction, both to the story and its characters. Looking forward to reading book Two and seeing where the author takes them from here. Definitely a great teaser for the rest!"

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Sold to the Dragons

"Even though this book is short it is still a great read and a must read at that"

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Good story

"Good characters, plot exciting, can't wait to read more, hopefully not to long of a wait."

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Sold to the dragons

"Great read! Recommend "

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Sold to thedragons

"I love your writing and your story I can’t wait for more."

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Great short read.

"A great start to what could be a fantastic series. I loved the connection between Talon and Elana. Yes, the story is short, but it is like an introduction story to the characters and leaves you hanging and wondering what is going to happen next. Great start, Lori. ❤️"

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Sold to The Dragons

"Delightful read. Will love reading book 2. Love reading fantasy books like this"

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Love this

"....... A good story "

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Red Dragon

"Well written story that mixes fantasy with a touch of sarcastic realism to entwine a fairy tale past with a less ethereal present. "

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Good stuff

"Great read. Anticipation is there. "

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Needs some grammer mistakes fixed

"With a little more effort, I think this could be a great read. "

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