What is your opinion?
To love a royalty
"I absolutely love romance especially a cinder all- type of love story. I recommend it to all hopeless romantic "
Jess
"REVIEWING AT FIVE CHAPTERS So, I think the premise is good. We love a good mysterious prince vibe. I will say, Jess gives me somewhatttt of a pick me vibe when she's kinda droning on and on about how much makeup all the other girls are wearing and their dresses - so that's something to watch out for you don't want to fall into the like Wattpad stereotypes. I also don't really get a sense of setting or time period. Where are we? Is this the future? The past? An alternate time period? B/c everything seems very in line with life today yet it's a kingdom with supernatural stuffs going on, so I'd maybe be a little more clear about that in the beginning so the reader can get their bearings of where they are and when. I also would maybe split the first chapter into two and make it a little longer. There's a lot of conflict that you introduce right of the bat, it's almost like a bit of whiplash. I'd like to see more of a central plot that's going to run through and have the emphasized in the beginning and the other parts can be added on later and spaced out a bit more so the reader can digest it all better. As far as technical stuff goes, I noticed that there is a lot of tense issues here and using passive voice. There are also a few punctuation issues, but it's mostly grammatical. Esp with matching plural/singular nouns to their verb. As in you'll mismatch a plural noun to a singular verb and vice versa. I'd use a program like Grammarly to help with this, it'll catch these mistakes for you and the free version works well. Ultimatley, I think you have a great imagination and good structure for the story. I just think there could be some improvement in the technical writing and in the pacing + worldbuilding. Those would be my three main areas that I think need to be improved, most pressing being the technical aspect, b/c a lot of readers click off when they see that without giving the plot a chance. Hope this helps and good luck!"
Jess’s dilemma
"Please add chapters quickly I need to know how Jess handles the bitchy princess "
JESS
""JESS" is a work-in-progress that's already packed with emotional highs and lows. From Jess's struggles with job interviews to her interactions with intriguing characters like Daniel and the mysterious man in Chapter 3, the story keeps you hooked. The narrative also touches on family dynamics and workplace tensions, adding layers of realism. Each chapter ends on a note that leaves you eager for more, making it a compelling read so far. "
Interesting Plot
"This story has an interesting plot. As a sucker for the broody, moody character finding a love interest they are softies for it's easy to get involved. However, the dialogue and descriptions could use some work because sometimes it takes out of the story or doesn't make the story easy to follow. "
