What is your opinion?
Thanks for incentivizing me to get yet another account devoted to fanfiction
"I love the idea of Death, Void, Magic, Time and all the other guys. The personification and anthropomorphization of those entities is fascinating to read about. I enjoyed the Michelle and Death (or should I call him Grimm) interactions quite a bit. The fact that you work in very real flaws (or tendencies) into Michelle's parents is admirable (parents not always having time to pay attention to you is a fact of life. I like to see what I read not violate any rules already set [stated outright, or implied by omission]). I am not a rabid fan of the past and present alternating paragraphs, but that is a personal thing and you do it well regardless, so I will tolerate that without further comment. In all fairness it does add a bit of depth to the story as you see the consequence and the process of Death committing to, well, death concurrently. Lastly, the sheer length of the first chapter was so heavenly glorious, massive kudos to you on your creative ability and commitment that enables that. Have an excellent morning/day/night!"
Why
"WHY? Why do not they see the evil they are doing? They only see the good and forget that each of them has a side of darkness. Love does more harm than many diseases. Life twists people until it leaves only a shadow of what it was. I despise them, more and more until the end. I can not believe that not one of them realized how Death felt, how much pain he endured every time one of his favored ones was taken by him, how lonely he felt, how used, how despised ... He is more powerful than all of them. Death reaches everything and everyone. All of them would know their end at some point, even Death itself. He would be carried by the Void at his end. It's horrible what they did to him. They pulled him out of his own essence. They took everything he is. He was going crazy, I know, but at his core, guilt did not belong to him alone. They wanted to give him a lesson, but it was a cruel cruelty, especially when much of the weight of their actions rested on them. I'm glad Michelle helped him start to meet again, and I'm sure he'll find out. I'm anxious to know what kind of revenge he's going to make on the other entities. They certainly deserve it. Misterymassacre"
Intresting
"The only thing that comes to my mind is: It's everything I was looking for and possibly so much more. Would you be terribly opposed to the idea of this (and maybe other ones too) story being translated ? I have far too much free time and I know many people who would love to read this, but sadly the don't know English well enough to read anything composed of more than two sestences. (My nick on FF is supernowy, if you ever feel the need of writing to me)"
ohno
"why why why why why why i dont know how to feel i feel bad for death??? im reading an entity spirallinggng into insanity and i,,.,., i cant its making me sad but i cant stop reading every word is carfully constructed to make me feeeelll death. Im either delusional or im actually feeling deaths emotions i was even hating his "family" by the time i was half way through the chapter I could honestly feel the budding feeling of hatred towards them and the apathy death was feeling woah i. feel jumbled up somuch to say and i dont know how to sayit properly im sorry this review isnt at all constructive but I m feeling somuch emotion right now"
11/10 Would recommend
"This is definitely a story I would reread, and that is coming from me. The plot is captivating, the characters are interesting and dynamic, and that is all good story really needs ( other than the obvious). The only thing I didn’t like that much was the way the story was written, and for some readers it might be confusing; other than that this is a really good story that I would reread."
