FAMILY TIES

"This story was very interestmaking. Poor Avery... being obsessed by so many guys that just want to own her and take revenge. Seems to me Marcus would have been a great match for her. Both Caleb and Noah drugged and screwed her and got her pregnant but only Noah (?) got questioned and caught. Some of the story got confusing with repeating circumstances and each guy getting accused of treating her same but not like the other. I think cutting and pasting some of the paragraphs were a good idea to save time but could have been edited a bit to make it make more sense. Lots of run-on sentences, punctuations in wrong places, misspelled and misused words. But suspense keeps me reading to see how story ends in spite of errors. Maybe have a beta to proofread before printing. But good storyline! Thank you! 🌺🤙🌺"