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Mech

"This story was kind of sad,but I enjoy it. It was through a warrior eyes which was kind of nice to have a story told by the warrior. "

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Wonderful and suspenseful

"Very well written with a serious yet emotional tone. You feel as if you knew the mech pilot personally, you feel his emotions. It was compelling and despite being set far from our time it made me ponder about the cruelties of war and politics. This evokes major emotion and I love the structure and delivery perfect writing style for this genre"

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