Inkitt
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A great find!

"I thoroughly enjoyed this. Clipped, to the point - quite poetic. I loved the tragic comedy of the ending and just how much the reader is left not knowing."

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"I really like this writing style. I easily understood what you character was feeling. Loneliness, want, loosing your mind, and to end with more disappointment.--Loved that. The human spirit is a hard one to brake."

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