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Messy Experiment!🧪💥

"Plot The plot moves forward with some instances of mysterious incident in the past. That being said, this story fits Literary Fiction for its style, but it needs better execution. The story leaves lots of unanswered question marks. Characters We have Edmund and Terrin, but even then these two were barely alive in the story. POV Third person omniscient point of view, but still we didn't get much needed explanation. Set A supposingly normal school with secrets that's never discovered within the story. Genre adherence This book fits the mystery genre better."

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