Great Potential

"This story is definitely interesting, and you can already see that it's not your typical story. Liana is a very interesting character, and I hope to see more development as the story progresses. The plot so far is suspenseful and enjoyable to read. My main problem was with the style of writing and some errors I found in the text. It distracted me a little from the story. Don't worry, this is easily fixed, and I think the author will be able to do that. :) Other than that, I think this story has great potential and I can't wait to see more of it! ***NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS BELOW."