Compelling Plot

"This is a very nice shortstory, with a compelling plot. But sadly, the grammar mistakes made it heard to read. Also sometimes the name "Oscar" was like every other word. The story itself is good, the writer put their heart into it, and I like the fact that Hanako gave the backstory of the painting. Maybe just put it through a grammar program, then it will be easier to read and the spelling or punctuation mistakes won't stop the reading flow :)"