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A great spin on the old love spell idea

"This is a great beginning to what promises to be an intriguing tale. The first chapters really give a great impression of our heroine Suze and the everyday world she lives in. Then the love spell kicks in and things go from rom-com to something that feels like it will be sinister. I am really looking forward to seeing how this progresses and whether Suze will find true love or something else!"

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Only 2 chapters but my new fave

"I love this. As of writing this there are two chapters. But I love your excellent writing and ability to tell a story. Being a witch myself I love anything magic/spell related. Not many stories make me laugh. I loved the first chapter. Please keep going and update. If you have not read this, you are truly missing out! "

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I like everything, i don’t seem to dislike anything yet.

"I would recommend it to my friends. I like the writers sense of humor. "

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