Good read!

"I really liked the way in which you opened the piece. It had me asking the questions - who was chasing this person and why, The 3rd paragraph gave a glimpse of things to come and was well written, and from thereon in, it only got better. I put my mind's eye in the vision Allison must have been having and it was quite a scary place to be. My only wish is that the chapter would have gone on for longer. Please do inform me of when you post more, I would love to read it. Mark."