Inkitt
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Could use editing! Amusing characters!

"I liked it enough to want a sequel! I love the pet name “Little Moon”. I really enjoyed Cayden and Rune’s bond and the characters interactions as well. I think if the author is still active it’s worth editing the story. There are lots of mistakes that they could fix to improve the reading experience. "

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Omg!

"Omg I soooo hope there is a second book to this. Such a great Storyline, and I'd say your best book written. "

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Stockholm

"Wow, hey, your writing style???? My God, it's beautiful. It flows from one sentence to the other seamlessly it's like reading poetry. I never really tried this kind of book but I was hooked from beginning to end(yes I finished it in a few hours, it's THAT good) all the emotions, the plot the twist and turns every page is like a xmas present, you never know what you will get. I loved every word on every page. Thank you for sharing your beautiful talent with the world. I'm literally gonna binge read all your other work. Well done❤️"

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Stockholm

"This story has so many twisted turns that you have to keep reading to know what happens next. I seriously couldn't stop reading. Fantastic job to the author "

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Stockholm

"I love that you keep me quessing! I read a lot of books (about 2-3 per week) so when an author can keep me quessing for more than half a book it's AWESOME 💯. Thank you so much for taking me on this WILD ride🥰♥️💗"

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Wow

"Without a doubt the best book I’ve read on this platform. The writing style keeps you interested and hooked. This book seems very well thought out & planned so that every twist and turn was perfect. I’m into ready dark books and I can’t wait for this author to release more of their work"

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Holy crap

"I think this is the best book I've ever read, I cried 6 times and wanted to die a million times, my heart is broken and there is no repair😖😖😖"

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Amazing 🤩

"I loved everything about this book! The Amazon characters and writing! I hope there will be a second book!!"

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Love this

"Loved the plot, the writing style. The characters were intense. Hoping you bring out a second book to this "

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Stockholm

"This is quite an enchanting book, though I was never a one to sympathize with a sadist I feel his point of view almost clarifies his actions and shows us that monsters are not born but made. And regardless of how bizarre it may be, knowing that there is someone to love you solely, completely is really heart-warming. "

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Excellent!

"Really enjoy how this novel.keeps getting deeper and deeper"

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Oh my gawd

"This is so on the edge of your seat....what's going to happen?"

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Love it!

"One of my favourite stories on the platform right now. Great plot, great characters, great writing. Suspenseful, intriguing, exciting, and everything in between. I'm hooked!"

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It’s great

"So far I’m really enjoying the book. It sucks you in.haven’t been able to put it down. "

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Stockholm

"I like that he is usually unapologetic. I’m not so fond of the lack of care of her that he has. When she behaves, he should be more willing to bring her the simple comforts. I was hoping he would try to impregnate her, rather than put the BC implant in. I’m truly hoping the dad finds a way out of prison. Somehow integrate him back with his son. "

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Stockholm

"Riveting 🖤"

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