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Gripping g storyline

"Well written characters, good flashbacks to dorm up back stories. Not too predictable."

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Sparrow

"This book is literally FIRE!!! Never have I read a book with as much emotion as this one. The plot, dialogue, planning, absolutely everything about this book is amazingly planned and written. I loved how you used Morrow's mothers death as a way to revive him back when he died on his last life. At first I cried a bit thinking he was going to actually die and that that would be it for his character, but your plot swooped in and saved me! Author your books are beautifully written!! Cant wait for the 4th little baby to come along!!"

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Captivating

"Captivating and enthralling book! Unable to put down. Writing flows well and it captures your imagination into a different world. Very good read"

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Sparrow

"Awesome story!!! I loved the characters and twists!!"

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Sparrow by ivy

"I absolutely loved this book definitely takes you on a roller coaster of emotions but is very much worth the read. 10/10 definitely recommend. Many kiddos and thanks to the author for making this great story."

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Beautifully done!

"What a great story! Definitely slower paced for a while, but worth it to me because of the intricate world building. I love the characters, and I love that the writer can wrench so many emotions from me while I read. The story is left open-ended; perfect setup for a sequel that I would happily read to answer my questions!"

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SPARROW

"The story is well written A good cast of interesting characters and good storyline & plot although not in the sense of a finale .It's not my kinda read exactly but it was a good story overall and any fantasy enthusiasts will definitely like this. Good Job Peace"

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Brilliant story from start to finish

"Brilliant story! I love this world and can’t wait to read more. Thank you xx"

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Sparrow

"Love this novel. Cannot put it down. Love the characters. Actually started to cry when Morrow died. Was happy he’s still with Sparrow. "

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Love it

"Good read! Loved every bit of this story, looking forward to many more from you. thank you."

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Love this

"I'm in love with these characters and can't wait to read more from them"

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Truely fantastic fantasy

"I’ve read a lot of fantasy in my time and it’s stories like this that make me love it as a genre. So beautifully done. I’m enthralled and can’t wait to read more."

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IF YOU NEED 1 REASON TO READ SPARROW THIS IS IT

"Let me just start by saying I'm not a fantasy girlie. I'll read it; sure, but it's not my go-to..... But damn am I hooked. Ivy has a way with words that makes me want to go into her head and dig around for the formula on how she words everything so perfectly. Her characters (especially Ronyn... Can I be his mate cuz this man-- scratch that. This werewolf me kicking my feet and giggling. He's so hot🤣🤣🤭) are so well written and I find myself wanting more dialogue between them than what was already given. Plz, I sense a love triangle and I usually hate those but I want it. I can't wait to see what else SPARROW has in store for me. Ps ivy... Can I be a beta reader, I can't wait for you to upload a chapter here. "

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horny opera

"*claps hands* Alright, so - I have read up to 20+ chapters of "Sparrow" and here are some of my thoughts: The prose is very elegant and pretty even when the narration adopts a 'spicier' or humorous tone. The formatting is tidy and has a specific aesthetic; I like the usage of the bold. The grammar is 99% on point. The pacing and flow are pretty good. The storyline is quite direct and tight; it lacks a bit in clear execution of the direction but that may be the slower pacing of the plot. The worldbuilding is currently marvelous! (The fictional racism is real) The setting has charm and its tropes are executed interestingly. The characters are entertaining (especially their horniness, it is funny to me). Elowen makes sense as the protagonist and her ... 'importance' does not feel forced like in other, similar stories. Ronyn is my favorite; he is the epitome of three-dimensional characterization despite his very specific, dominant traits. I am painfully indifferent to Morrow - but from the latest chapters I have read, he is beginning to feel more fleshed out and more convincing as an individual. The side characters (not good with names) do their narrative job and have funny lines here and there. The character dynamics have a lot of care in their building which I appreciate and can visiualise. And the author is good with depicting tension (sexual or not), which further serves the story. This type of fiction (omegaverse-ish) is not usually my type of go-to in wrritten stories but this is a stand-out, fun exception. I may read more, as I am invested in Elowen and Ronyn's relationship and the world. Overall nice stuff. Keep it up, author!"

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