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Devil behind the door

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Summary

PROLOGUE: This story is dedicated to readers seeking a captivating blend of light romance, thrilling suspense, loyalty tested by fire, and a rollercoaster of emotions, where love can turn to hate, and hate can become love. In the shadows of an unexpected thriller, mysteries unravel, and an addictive storyline unfolds—can you guess what lies beneath the surface? Our tale begins with a girl, one whose introverted nature often overshadows her existence. Yet, calling her an introvert doesn't quite capture the complexity of her character. She's an enigma, a repository of countless secrets that she guards with the utmost zeal. Her name? Chin. Chin's life is colored by the vivacious presence of her best friend, Elly. Elly embodies everything Chin is not—she's charming, extroverted, and radiates an infectious vitality. There are no secrets that Elly hasn't shared with Chin, or so it seems. But beneath the facade of friendship lies an unspoken truth: Chin believes that somewhere out there, in the vast tapestry of the world, there exists a person her eyes are yearning to meet. It's a belief that has earned her a reputation, one that the world sees as obnoxious and selfish. Born into a family where respect is currency, Chin's father is a renowned businessman, and her mother a celebrated designer. Their lives are intertwined with the high society, their connections far

Genre
Mystery,Romance
Author
Nad
Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 :FIRST ENCOUNTER

''Mom, I'm heading off to uni. Finished my breakfast," Chin announced as she grabbed her bag.

"Wait," her mother called out. "Today, we have an annual dinner at Mrs. James' place. You should be there by 8 pm. Understand?"

Chin hesitated. "I'll try, but I have an exam the day after tomorrow, so I need to study at the library."

Her mother's tone turned firm. "No event will last more than two hours. You must come to the party at 8 pm. It's non-negotiable. Understand?"

"Okay, Mom," Chin agreed reluctantly.

The scene shifted to the University of Chin, where she met her friend Elly.

"Chin, your parents are so controlling. I wish I never had to see their faces again. Just being near them gives me chills," Elly said.

Chin nodded in agreement. "I try to obey them as much as possible just to avoid their presence. They act like masters, not parents. They even ordered me to attend the dinner today, knowing I have an exam on Monday. If I score poorly, they'll scold me. People wonder why I'm so rebellious."

"But you should go to the dinner," Elly urged. "There are so many handsome boys there."

Chin sighed. "You know, Elly, I dislike rich people, handsome men, and pretty girls."

Elly chuckled. "Can I go instead of you?"

Chin shook her head. "My parents would kill me, and I have no money to support myself."

"Aw, my poor baby," Elly teased. "You deserve better."

That night, Chin arrived at the party wearing her favorite baggy jeans and an oversized shirt, true to her style. She wasn't one for exposing much of her body, but simplicity suited her.

She approached the corner where her mother was standing with Mrs. James and her daughter. All three women were dressed to the nines in fancy dresses and jewelry.

"Mom, I'm here," Chin announced.

Mrs. James commented, "Chin, what are you wearing tonight? It's a lavish party. Look around; everyone is dressed so beautifully."

Chin replied confidently, "I think I'm already pretty, and my beauty doesn't depend on dresses or makeup."

Mrs. James seemed taken aback. "You're quite straightforward, Chin. But you won't find a good match this way. Look at Lee; she got a boyfriend at the last dinner, and now they're planning to get married."

Chin smirked. "Good for you, Lee. I'm amazed you found someone who wants to marry you, not your family's business."

Lee retorted, "Well, Chin, you might end up with a psychopath or an antisocial person the way you repel everyone around you."

Chin quipped, "That would be great. I want to marry a psychopath or an anti-human person."

Chin's mother intervened, "Chin, can I talk to you for a minute?"

Chin agreed, "Sure, Mom."

After a brief conversation with her mother, Chin decided to leave the party. On her way out, she accidentally bumped into a guy in a black suit who was talking on the phone. He didn't look back, didn't apologize, and walked into the hall as if he were a secret agent on a mission, ignoring her.

Chin muttered, "What kind of lunatics come to this place with no manners? He should at least say sorry."

The chance encounter left her curious about the mysterious stranger and what kind of role he might play in her unpredictable life.

(End of Chapter 1)

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This part really stood out to me:
“I think I’m already pretty, and my beauty doesn’t depend on dresses or makeup.”
I really love this moment Chin’s personality comes through so clearly and strongly in this scene.
And the little moment when she bumps into the guy in the black suit was super intriguing. It feels like a quiet but important turning point, and I’m really curious about who he is and what role he’ll play in Chin’s life.
By the way, I actually have a few questions about your story, and I’d love to discuss this scene with you if you’re open to it.

7 months

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