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Virgie's Take

"Changes make this story better. In the previous version, Alexis and Lucas were good friends who loved each other. This off and on again dance makes the separate mates seem more plausible."

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Self acceptance and tolerance

"Thank you for writing this sweet story and sharing it with us readers. I greatly appreciate that you have translated your stories into English so that you can share them us readers."

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Pretty girls - story of Alexis

"Sweet short story "

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Pretty girls - story of alexis

"Omg.. this was amazing and totally awesome. I loved it."

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Pretty girls- story of alexis

"Great read!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Symphony

"Good read.it's been a crazy ride but thank goodness she realizes her feeling and put her parents in their place "

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I love it!

"I really appreciate Alexis' thoughts. We'll see if I like the vampires or not, I'm still undecided;)"

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