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Well-crafted! Gripping and unique!

"I read so many poorly written stories since the advent of e-books that I'm blown away by this author's proper grammar and writing skills. (I only found two small errors in the entire story.) His pacing is extraordinary, keeping me reading as fast as I can. I like this type of ending... My style of horror! I look forward to more from Reichenbach, a writer to be reckoned with in the literary world."

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Dark fantasy

"The author has shown how children think in this story. The end makes me think of changelings from folklore and wonder if the author got the idea for this dark tale. The first idea that came to mind when the eggs found were dragons, so them hatching to be fairies was a twist I wasn't seeing. It's a dark fantasy without being flowerily and raining love-hearts. It makes me feel as if this should really happen, like a tale that'll be told to future generations. When the fairies took someone away. Like old tales in the same taste from the dark ages. Mixing magic with the real world and throwing dark into the mix makes this an enjoyable read."

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Fab

"This is a cool idea and an enjoyable read. I like how the start with the bunny follows throughout the story. The surprise with the fairies made my day! I'd want to read more from this writer. Looking forward for more."

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Milk Teeth

"I became so engrossed in this story !!!! I want to know what happened ...I would love to read more !!!! very suspenseful and extremely interesting !!!!! Loved it !!!! The characters were very interesting and personable. The story plot was very interesting"

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