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Rejected Gamma

"Great story "

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Rejected protector

"Good story "

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Rejected Protector

"This book is well written and the plot is amazing and well detailed so you know what is going on and can make guesses for the rest of the story as you go , a few mistakes but not many and you can easily see and correct it yourself as you read along . Well recommended fantastic read cant put it down , you will miss out on sleep so fair warning haha "

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Rejected Protector

"This is a great story, and I would recommend it to everyone. The main character is feisty and doesn't put up with nonsense "

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Amazing

"Excellent story, i read it in 2 days i can't wait for more on the saga "

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Rejected protector - good story!!

"Other than a few typos/grammatical errors it's a really engaging story!"

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Rejected protector

"The grammar was a little off. There were quite a bit of typos. "

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Wow

"This story kept needs engaged and wanting to just keep reading, even if it ment I was up all night... Such a wonderful story. It is not often that I find stories that engage a lot of different emotions in me, but this one did.... Thank you for such a wonderful, emotion inducing, and happy tear jerking story"

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Loved it

"Heerlijk boek om te lezen. Niet te langdradig wat veel boeken hebben tegenwoordig "

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GOOD

"Like the book so far. The plot has been sucking me in, so I want to read further. Know I don't understand why we can read Trevor POV. I guess I should keep reading to understand that. Can't wait for Selestes second chance mate. "

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Rejected Protector

"The book was immediately captivating right off the bat. It kept you engaged, had you guessing at the direct twists and turns and had you begging for more! Was an absolute treat to read! 5/5"

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"It was a good read"

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Couldn't put it down

"Great read. I actually ended up taking some time off work one day because I couldn't put the story down. Very compelling story. There are a few places where the wrong word is used, which was a little distracting, but those are minor and can be easily cleaned up. Highly recommend this story (just start on a Friday night if you dont want it impacting work like it did for me). Only thing I would offer is that maybe the main character is a little too perfect - she is always right. Nothing she does or says is ever wrong and she never makes mistakes or apologies. I get that is the point of the story that she is 100% pure of heart, but it would have been nice to see she be a little more fallible maybe when it came to her fated mate. She could be more "human" and make mistakes around him and not have to be perfect and still have him love her. If he's the only one making mistakes and she never does and never has to apologize to him, and he is screwing up and has to apologize, it becomes a lopsided relationship. "

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Excellent novel!

"I loved the characters and the drama, even the heartstopping bits! I was glad that the author didn't fill out the book with nonsense, like many other authors do. I will definitely read more from this author. Thankfully there weren't many spelling errors. Most online authors make many errors, especially when writing the exiting or gripping parts of their story. Mistakes can be frustrating for the reader as it interrupts the flow of the drama. Over all 'Well Done'! PS I may have to read this book again as I enjoyed it so much...... "

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Refreshing

"This book is so refreshing, I've read books my whole life . This writer is refreshing I've read alot of paranormal books I've almost read this book in one day."

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Excellent story

"This isn’t your typical shifter romance novel, this is a powerful female lead who is strong, loving and compassionate. Can’t wait to read more by this author!"

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Some inconsistencies

"I'm really enjoying the story. Are you a consistencies with time lines. About someone is going to show up within a couple of hours to they're showing up over a week later. It happened when the main character showed up The vampire den. And when alpha Blake was influenced by magic and King was sending someone to investigate. But other than the few inconsistencies that way and really enjoying us the door But overall story is very well wrote. It has a very clear plot that doesn't wonder all into weird. Subplots And I really recommend it. I normally do not write reviews maybe 1 and 100 books that I read Will I ride with you if that often. That is how much I enjoy being this book"

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Rejected Protector

"Like it. A fresh breath in the reading world after long."

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Rejected protector

"I really enjoyed this book. The story grabbed me from the very beginning. I could not pit it down."

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review

"one of the best books I've read. I like this auther. I will be reading more of her books. some books are so long i lose interest this one was just right."

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