Inkitt
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FUCKED UP

"This is so messed up I feel bad for every character here except the Dad I wish I could bring back Their mom just to kill her again but this time with torture Fucking child sex abuser Honestly want both of them to heal and find happiness I feel bad for the wife too Idk whether i should hope for her to leave her husband or forgive him Honestly a dilemma Note : you should remove "gay twinciest romance" from the title. Makes it sound kima cheap ig This is so well written Commendable "

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Great story

"Are you going to continue writing this? I really hope you will. I’m so invested in this story. Liam is very cute, and seems open minded (I feel like he still gonna accept Carson after find out his relationship with Carter). And I hope Carson dumps his bad brother and ends up with Liam. They would make a cute couple "

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More more more

"You opened the can of worms, now we need more. Maybe it's a silly little story to you but I'm getting invested in the characters. What will happen to my twins? Will Selene make it thru everything? Can't wait to read more!"

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Lonely@405

"Interesting storyline, excellent characters "

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Brotherly Obsession

"It's just AMAZING, omg"

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I don't remember

"I don't like how the bottom feels all the time how he is the one to get hurt. I want the top to feel hurt 10 times more than him."

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Lovely

"I like everything about the story "

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