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Well Crafted Fantasy World

"I'm just beginning it, and will read more but wanted to stop and drop a review because this is a great world. I love fantasy worlds that are well crafted, not just the characters, and this one is slow to introduce me so I can take my time understanding. It feels like its building towards something large but the pace is great."

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Good start

"Cant wait ro ready more"

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Call of Magic

"Can’t wait for the rest of this story to unfold. Perhaps they could rule together yet live separately … the king may not be recognized but his son would be!"

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Great fantasy

"If you like fantasy, good writing and magic then this is a great read. "

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Call of magic

"Hard to judge this story at this point. Simply need to read on and see what happens. "

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