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What is your opinion?
The Right Guy
"It was an okay read. You introduced some interesting plot lines, but they were not fully developed. Your main male lead was to be a billionaire, but he did not carry himself as such; he had no security detail, no security cameras at his condo. Her brother murdered out of the blue. (No back story or build up). I liked the friendship bonds displayed. I enjoyed the cultural language you used, as well. I hope you do a follow-up story because there were story lines unfinished. "
The Right Guy
"I disliked the grammar used in this story. "
