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Hilarious

"Thank you for sharing this creative concoction of a tale. Loved it! So many spoofs. Such great fan fiction. Such amazing twists and turns. Looking forward to reading more of your stories."

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Good read

"I like the way this story goes but I hope I'm not at the end i want to know about their adventures in this "hunted house""

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A Real Hoot!

"I’ve been having a great time reading this book. It is, essentially, a revolving door of different settings and mini adventures that add up to one big hilarious journey. Seeing as this book is In Progress, I suspect I’ll be seeing more of this in the future, which is a good thing. I would highly recommend this to people who need a good laugh and a bit of fun shenanigans. A small little thing I noticed, however, a lot of times expressive words/phrases are followed by both an exclamation mark and a comma which isn’t exactly proper, but it does get the point across so I guess it works. Also, each “book” or segment of this story is from a different POV, but no POV tags are used. HOWEVER, it is VERY EASY to figure out who is the narrator using the well provided context clues. Well done, author! I hope you keep on writing!"

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A magical house and exploring human-kind

"From the get go, you can tell the author has a great sense of humor and playful nature from the cute book cover and the title's play on words. Once you get into the story the magical house is a pleasant surprise. What you think is a simple explanation becomes multidimensional within a few paragraphs. The pace is quick and the story is fun! References about good vs bad and original sin are done well and not oversold. Plenty of energy as well. I look forward to reading more from this author! "

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