What is your opinion?
A nice story
"I enjoyed this story. It has a lot of twists and turns in it and some sad moments that are very much worth the read but also some lovely fun many parts. I would love to see a second part to this book. Good job. I enjoy this book "
Excelente
"Buena historia "
Gamma's destined mate
"Liked it.. cute and short love story "
Good
"I'm a sucker for a good romance novel, it is very good. There is some Grammer errors, but nothing to bad to keep me from reading it "
Gamma's Destined Mate
"I really enjoyed reading this book. "
Emotional rollercoaster
"I love the characters and how the story sucks you in. I can't put it down."
Gammas destined mate
"Great store lots of exciting moments to keep you wanting to read more I do wish there was more to the story to cut all the loose ends but still overall a great read "
Great story!!
"I really enjoyed this book. Without giving anything away, I enjoyed the way the book ended. This book had me on a rollercoaster of emotions. I have been happy, sad, mad, frustrated, worried, and then happy again. I would definitely recommend this book. "
Nikki's Review
"Very common plot but I love the way the author tells her own version. The way the story is told and the amount of ah shit moments definitely keep you going because you want to know what happens next. Good job with drawing in your readers and taking us away into this world you've created. "
Great story
"Every chapter definitely kept you wanting more. I didn't like how quick the Mc forgave her boyfriend but other wise it was a good book."
I NEED MORE
"I cannot believe how addicting this story is! I need to know what happens! "
Destined Mate
"I cannot wait for more chapters to come out! I am loving the characters and can't believe the author stopped it right before they met! LOL. Very good story. I highly recommend it. I will definitely be following this author for chapter updates and more stories. "
Interesting story so far!
"I love a good destined mate story. As of writing, there are only four chapters, but they are wonderful so far; the tension comes into play fairly quickly, so you find yourself invested early on! There is also a tiny bit of spice without being overly spicy, which is something I personally admire. Aside from a few minor spelling/grammar hiccups, I think this will turn out to be a great read! "
Great plot and lovable charcters!!
"So far I read it was quite a decent storyline which seems to hold a lot of potential to be a great Novel. The main two characters are quite interesting and fascinating I'll live to follow them...both of them have their own perspective and priorities and it makes them more likeable...I'll wait eagerly for the next chapter...great job dear author "
Gamma's destined mate
"Beautiful story, well thought out characters and plot"
Good!
"I think the plot is pretty decent. I've read other werewolf stories like this before, and a lot of the side characters are flat and could use more development to give the story a little umph, but if it ain't broke, don't fix it - so even if it is similar to other werewolf stories of "I'm broody because of XYZ trauma so I'm not gonna accept my mate who is emotionally vulnerable because of XYZ trauma" that's not a huge issue because people like them, and you created a good narrative around it. I think this does suffer a big from the show vs. tell problem - you tend to tell rather than show. Leave a bit more up to the reader and don't just explain things right away. Again, I also think the plot is really hurt by very one-dimensional side characters. It feels like I'm reading a high-school YA novel in that sense with stock characters thrown in there. Also, the technical writing needs work. There are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors throughout that make it hard to read at times, but I won't dwell on that too much since it's an easy-ish fix. Ultimatley, I think you have a good narrative focus as far as an enticing plot, good main characters, and tried and true romance tropes. You've done a good job at world-building, too. I would just focus on character development and show vs. tell and that would help you a lot in future projects. Good luck!"
Fun weekend read
"This was a fun, quick read. There were few grammar/ punctuation issues, thankfully making it flow easily. I enjoyed the overall plot of the story but felt it was a little rushed towards the end. You tied up all the loose ends but with a predictable and not very detailed way. I enjoyed the characters but would have liked to know what happened to make her have the confidence to reach above an omega and some of the trials that were eluded to."
Surprise Steps
"I never expected the two fiancés to meet this early into the story; I expected the Jose sister to be in the room. I loved the unexpected."
Gamma’s Destined Mate
"The plot is excellent, very different from the cliched werewolf stories. I am enjoying it very much. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors that sometimes made the flow of reading difficult, however a good editor can fix that. The writer definitely has talent."
Spannendes Buch
"Spannendes Buch Guter Schreibstil "
