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Working with Characters

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Rules “I’m going to start with the men,” Jamar said with a smile. “They have to be single, no kids, and none of that ‘I have a fiancé crap.’ I want the dreamers and the dream builders. I have a website up and everything. I host weekly online chats about what I am looking for in my residents. I’ll need a farmer, a construction worker, an electrician, a doctor, a cook, those kinds of folks. I also want a store owner to set up a mercantile. Jamar spoke slowly, “I have rules for my town, Mr. Kinson. The first rule is no women. No single women. No women in the bunkhouse. The only women allowed in the town are the wives of the men once they marry.” “Okay,” Jack said. “Second, you have to take the pledge that you are your brother’s keeper,” Jamar said. “What does that mean?” “It means you don’t get to screw any other man’s woman,” Jamar said. “Also, I am now your brother, but a brother that you like. Our success in this venture is predicated upon us being able to rely on each other. In order for me to rely on you, I have to trust you. Can I trust you, Jack?”

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Getting into Character

Readers enjoy my stories because my characters are lifelike. I write characters with hopes, fears, hobbies, and traits that make them, well more human.

When writing your primary character, it is important to understand what motivates this person to get out of bed each day. Moreover, what is happening in their lives to push them from the comfort zone of the home they currently reside into starting over in the middle of nowhere Wyoming?

I always start here. Yes, I know how tall my character is, I write romance, therefore, unless otherwise specified, he is at least six feet. No one wants to fantasize about being ravaged by a man who is 5 feet 6. It can work, but I want to look up at him with wanton desire in my eyes. There is also something rather comforting to be embraced, and his chin rests on your head. I am inserting a loud sigh here.

Now, to make the character interesting in a short amount of words, they must have a hobby or an unusual skill. This skill can pop up at the most inopportune, or opportune moment in the story. This skill can also change how others view this person.

Moving on to the secondary character, or love interest. Who says it has to be a human? It can be an animal that means the world to the primary character. I wrote one story where my hero first falls head over heels in love with a daughter he never knew he had, and by loving her with everything in him, he was also able to learn how to love her mother.

Introducing a love interest can be tricky. I love to write smart women, smart, not bossy, or pushy. They are capable and bring a little something to the table and the conversations are great. Don’t cheat the reader, give these two a point of connection to make those sparks.

The Inciting Incident: This is the event that sparks or propels the character on their journey. It doesn’t have to be a house burning down, or walking in on a lover in the throes of passion with some one else. However, there must be a catalyst to make the character get a move on. If you are writing this section, it should take you up to 750 words, and into page 3.Start writing here…

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