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A forbidden love

"Well, I loved every bit of it. The suspense between the Prince and the crown princess is killing me.💔😩😱😭 In the twist and turns of it all, I wish for the two to be together🤗💞💏. At the end of it all, I wish for her to garner enough strength and aides to help expose the wickedness of those behind the atrocities committed with the position as the new queen or maybe not as queen but a free woman🤔. Much love❤❤❤ for the hard work and such a lovely story. Can't wait for season 2 of this story!!!💃🤞"

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I like the premise of the story of the story so far. An absent husband, an available brother in law and a very spiteful mother in law. It makes for a natural sort of tension that propels the story forward.

"Some spelling mistakes and repetition of some phrases are tiring. There should be more varied phrases to elevate the dialog."

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