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Little work
"It was good but it had first person view as well at third person veiw. Also missing grammar punctuation. Needs work on grammar as well. Other than some stuff, it's really good. Keep up the good work."
"It was good but it had first person view as well at third person veiw. Also missing grammar punctuation. Needs work on grammar as well. Other than some stuff, it's really good. Keep up the good work."