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Love it!!

"This book is very engaging! I feel like a fly on the wall "

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Love love loved it

"Can’t wait for book 2 I cried when Oscar read out Lucas speech "

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Fallen Between

"Good story, liked it a lot❤️"

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Great

"Great story "

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A griping story

"This has been a fantastic story I highly recommend reading it and thank you to the author for sharing it !!"

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Another Great Story

"I love this story and the plot. I did notice that at the end of one of the chapters, a part of it is repeated. I don't think it was intentional and don't think it's a major issue. I just thought as the author, you should be aware of it."

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Needs work

"Compared to the authors other stories I.e the seductive vibrations series, this story needs work. It was a little hard to follow in parts; some unrealistic moments; Melodys scar on her back is mentioned but not how she got it. She seemed to be very self conscious about it, yet wants to flaunt her body all the time. Because of how great the other stories are, I stuck with this one. But in the end I didn’t enjoy it much. "

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