Embracing Eternity

"Your work is truly amazing. Your ability to vividly describe scenes and emotions allows me to connect deeply with your work. Please continue to do what you are doing because it is truly amazing. I always had a strong desire to read or listen to one more story as a child. The young boy's reaction is quite accurate. The last thing I would suggest is to add unique yet simple synonyms though I also face a bit of difficulty in this. Nevertheless, this is something every writer goes through. More power to you, "