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Betrayed luna’s revenge

"Its a good read . Character are very interesting"

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Interesting

"So far it ok and plot is interesting so I am going to see what’s next in the novel"

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Love it so far I'm glad she wants revenge but hope she realizes her mate is worth more I love ❤️ the romance and the love that mates have

"I love this book so far I really get into my books almost like I can feel how they feel and just love the romance that mates have "

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Luna

"Great story. Love the plot and it’s well written. Can’t wait to find out how this story develops. "

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The betrayed Luna's revenge

"It's soooooo good and I love how Elora has turned badass queen keep up the wonderful work author I absolutely love this book"

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The betrayed Lunas revenge

"Elora just needs to give Damon a chance. She knows she wants him. She knows he loves her and will always be there "

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Ummm, not sure on the name

"Love it so far"

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Good

"Good writing "

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Really enjoying this one.

"Loving the story so far!"

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❤❤❤

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The betrayed Lunas revenge

"Great story, cannot wait for the rest of the chapters"

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It's an ok story thus far

"The story is decent enough thus far but there is quite a bit of unnecessary filler. And the author mixes up the character names quite a few times, especially the two main female characters."

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The Betrayed luna revenge

"Good read so far"

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Can't remember

"Enjoying the book so far "

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Pretty good start

"I can see this will be an interesting story "

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All over the place

"It would be nice if the reader had an inkling of what the heroine is planning. So far she is all over the place. Sending everyone to the dungeon and torturing them. And there is no real plan, other than claiming that she has a plan, to replace them. Also, there is no rhyme and reason for her behaviour towards her mate. I don't see the point of the ranking system here as it doesn't add anything to the characters, other than a minor issue at the beginning to claim her inheritance. However, if one is not thinking too hard about the plot, than it is a fun read about scheming people who get their just deserts."

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