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Omg...😩

"So tragically beautiful. I'd recommend to anyone but for those, especially, who appreciate the art. Well done"

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Didn't like it as much as I thought I would in the beginning

"Firstly, I'm very very very very very much confused with the ending. I'd have loved a little more details to why Valerian disappeared. And if you knew you would disappear, why involve someone with you? Briar might not ever fall in love again, or she...I donno. And if he didn't know that he would disappear then what caused it? Is it somehow because Valerian fell in love again or something?And I thought maybe Briar was Valerian's reincarnated lover. But no. Few other things were confusing too in the story. I was really really really invested in the story in the the first 2/3 of the story. "

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