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☆OCEAN DEMENTED☆

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Summary

Guinevere lives her life near the ocean. She believes that if tried hard enough, she'll fulfill her dreams of becoming a siren. During this journey, she hears voices that deam random people as evil, the voices tell her to harm those people to protect the sirens.

Genre
Drama,Horror
Author
Jasmine
Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

I start my day with a warm cup of coffee, not just any coffee, but a salted caramel latte. My favorite.

While I drink my coffee, I admire the beautiful ocean waves, I bought a house on the beach because I love them so much. I love waves, or just ocean, water in general is a beautiful element.. I’m starting to think that I was meant to be a dolphin, or a whale, or any sea creature. I’m leaning towards the idea of me being a siren the most, some people say they aren’t real, but they are…I’ll prove it one day, by becoming one myself.


I’m very dedicated to my goal, I started bathing myself in ocean water so I could feel closer to my true form.


Today, I brought crystals to speed up the process, I laid them across the shore and got on my knees. I felt the waves crash against them, and I dug my hands into the sand. Seashells filled my palms as I curl up and sink into the water, I opened my eyes because I heard some kind of screeching. It was a baby, a baby floating in the ocean, alone. I panicked and swam as fast as I could to the babies rescue, it felt like it was floating away until I grabbed it.

The poor baby was sobbing and coughing up water, I knew that I had to take care of it to show mother nature that I’m capable of raising a child.

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