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The hybrid princess

"Beautiful story, love all the books,love everything! I love this series."

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Love it!!! 🩷🩷🩷

"Love it!!! "

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Where is the next installment?

"You need to run your work through grammar checker before publishing EVERY CHAPTER. Failure to do so proves you are an amateur not a professional. Grammerly is free to use. get it. Few spelling errors but lots of wrong word usage. Spell checkers will not catch those. I was totally absorbed in this book, as a writer myself, that's hard to do, but the grammatical mistakes are action stoppers! You have great talent! Now learn to do it right."

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Great!

"I keep thinking, "This is my favorite book," and then I read the next one!"

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The hybrid princess

"Very good book. So sorry she had to loose her dragon spirit and Saffire, her wolf, but that's part of life... Thanks, Author "

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So good

"Can wait for the lost kingdom "

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Roll legacy one through 13

"Please finish the series. They have been really good . Can't wait to see what happens.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️"

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Needs proofreading

"There's quite a few errors. For example, it should read: hear not here. clothes not close our not are... These are just a few examples. The story is OK, but I feel the primary starting plot with the Were children and Witches is left behind for the mating story. Tori chooses her future - no description of the awakening from An or Tori's point of view. The story then cuts to roughly 2 years later, discussing the witches again. Nothing seems to have happened with this original plot in the interim period. I like the characters and there's a nice, easy flow to the writing style, but it's quite short, even for a book 1. "

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